Feedback to Peer 2 - (Kesara)

My Feedback to Kesara's Reflection

Hi Kesara, I am Benjamin and I am going to be giving Feedback to your reflection 1 using the SKS Method. To begin, your reflection was very professionally written, and I especially liked the detailed examples of the negative and positive examples of technology in Education which I thought was wonderful and you should keep doing, and the statistics you included from Cohen were a nice touch. Furthermore, the way you ended your reflection and included examples of how you will embed these newfound ideas and thoughts into your classroom was very well done and I especially liked how you linked every new idea to an aspect of a classroom and also included an example of platforms such as eSafety. In terms of things I believe you should start doing, I would’ve liked to see more personal examples, such as the way you felt in school when technology was pushed towards you or examples you’ve seen in the everyday world of how technology has taken over, examples like that would’ve been good to make the reflection more reflective, without it I feel like its more like a study/discussion. Overall, a well-written reflection that includes some very good examples 😊

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