Feedback to Peer 1 - (Ellie)

My Feedback to Ellie

Hi Ellie, my name is Benjamin and I will be giving feedback to your reflection 2 using the SKS method. To begin, your reflection was amazingly detailed, and the vast array of examples and references you used was superb. I especially liked the personal touch of admitting that you are an active user of social media apps such as Tiktok/Snapchat because it reminds us we are not perfect and I enjoyed that aspect of the reflection. In terms of things I believe you should stop/start doing, I would’ve liked to see the reflection broken up a bit more into short paragraphs so it doesn’t look like one big slab of writing. There are also a few spelling errors such as Behabviour rather than Behaviour, and Distarction rather than Distraction. Finally, I would’ve liked to see how you would use these newfound ideas in the classroom and how you would try and prevent your students from becoming too reliant on digital technology and social media apps like you mentioned you had. Overall a very well-written reflection with lots of well-thought-out detail. 🙂

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